My goal was to write a metaphor poem that was inspired by rain. A metaphor is when you compare something with another thing. I am happy with the description I used and how I made sure it was not boring.
I spent a lot of time working on my rain poem I through it was really fun after that when I went on to my may dos and I had a really good time.I was happy with how the teacher liked my poem and how I finished it 😃.
omg Elise you did a awesome gob but edit next time.from luella
ReplyDeleteomg Elise your the soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. good at poem's.but next time writ more about the poem
ReplyDeleteYou spelled stuff wrong u NingNoing.
Deleteok GOOOOOSHHH!!!!
ReplyDeleteExcellent job on describing the rain. This reminds me of when I was at my dads and it was raining very hard. I don't want to be harsh but why are you describing the rain and put a lightning sentence in it? Perhaps next time you could try to not do this... time.I was (you forgot to add a space between the dot And the I.
ReplyDeleteHope I was not too harsh - Maya.J